Underneath Poem by Savannah Churchill

Underneath

Rating: 3.8


Underneath these sheets
There's a soft, warm world of love
Here waiting for you.

Pillows of satin
On which we lay together
I can hear your heart.

I can feel your breath
as we dance into the night
Together as one.

Rushing emotions
Pain, pleasure, extasy, love
Combine within me.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Adryan Barnathan 07 January 2006

A beautiful poem.....thank you!

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Charles Chaim Wax 25 December 2005

like the positive joy felt so deeply no despair under the sheets and since despair lunges into the heart at all times your moment of beauty lovely

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Tiyler Durden 02 December 2005

I give it a 1 for repressed homosexuality

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Ernestine Northover 27 November 2005

I like th idea of those pillows of satin, I must go and buy some to try. This is a stirrer! ! ! ! Emotionally! ! ! ! Love Ernestine XXX

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