Unexplainable Love Poem by Aditya Mudbhary

Unexplainable Love

Rating: 4.9


In the moment of drowsiness and indolence,
I am elevated to a new dimension,
Away to a forest, Oh so dense,
Brings a feeling of new sensation.

The smell of early morning mist,
And the smile on thy face as the moonlight breaks,
Beauty as such that none can list,
The beauty of a goddess that your smile makes.

A hallucination of nothing sweeter,
Of a girl thats you which makes my heart litter,
Love that is unexplainable,
Which I try n explain but im unable.

You are thee sun in its brightest form,
Or even the moon in midnight prom,
As you sway like the tree's as the wind winnows,
And when i look into your eyes, Oh the love that shows.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Sans Serif 05 October 2009

Again. This sounds like something the speaker in Sweet Misery would say to their love. Awesome poem.

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Obinna Eruchie 07 October 2009

This has a wonderful description, full of tenderness.

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Lynda Robson 09 October 2009

A tender love poem Eddy, thanks 10 Lynda xx

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Aldo Rino Smiloveux-bell 12 October 2009

A very good love poem. Very touching.

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Emily Maddison Saffron...x 16 October 2009

i like this poem keep up your writing..! !

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Anne Unknown 25 February 2010

this, too, is a very pretty poem. you expressed yourself very well. keep it up

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Emma Adamyan 31 October 2009

A hallucination of nothing sweeter, Of a girl thats you which makes my heart litter, Love that is unexplainable, Which I try n explain but im unable. oh, i like it

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Corey Threet 22 October 2009

Wow I felt that poem I've written similar poems in the past. Sometimes love is so strong that words can't describe them. But you know the feeling is there. Thanks for sharing and remember. Spread Yourself! ! ! ! ~Xeniyah

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Patrick A. Martin 18 October 2009

Get rid of the thy in this one it dosen't fit but that's all it's a good poem Eddi

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Krupa ... 16 October 2009

U got to be in love... to make this poem flawless... keep up!

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