Unfair Poem by lola hi l

Unfair

Rating: 5.0


it's not fair when you get nothing when you deserve everything
it's not fair when you try the best that you had to gave
as a result you fail it brokes your heart when it's brave
it's so not fair when the things didn't take the correct way
that should go throw and it ignores all the efforts that you do
it's unfair when you lye on the bed, on the corner, on the floor
with sounds in the head makes you undrestand
and realise the situation more
it's unfair when all of the others fail but you are the last
it's unfair when the doors are opened to others
that you are sure that you are more better
but it's lucked in ypu face
it's so unfair when you watch your dreams fade away in space
everything is not fair but i think
in the end
it's fair
to say that the life is unfair..
..is so unfair.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Luwi Habte 10 July 2009

oh, your poetry is so nice i like it all you did good job and well and well! luwi

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Steven Pimentel 11 July 2009

this poem is tuff.. i like it

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&&angel4ever && 04 August 2009

good piece keep working.............10

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Henry Brown 18 July 2009

It is unfair that like life your poem is too short..unfair but fact

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Ency Bearis 16 July 2009

a deep cogitations...but it is expressed and written well...

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Anjali Sinha 13 July 2009

Theres so much depth in this poem but I like it..... like a literary piece

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Bele Lele 11 July 2009

I like this one.life is unfair but we can really do anything. good job

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