Treasure Island

Hannah Ramirez


Once upon a time
I met this guy
Whose shimmering eyes
makes me shy
Whenever he looks at me
I automatically squirm
And because of that melting gaze
I can't stand firm

Yet my hopes and dreams vanished
like what you did
I never knew that it will happen indeed
Every night while looking at the night sky,
I always wish
That you still wonder about me
even though you left me with tears.

Submitted: Tuesday, April 29, 2014
Edited: Tuesday, April 29, 2014

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  • John Westlake (5/2/2014 5:05:00 PM)

    A well written poem. In answer to your question, most guys at some point will think of people who he has left behind and people who have left him behind so your wish would be granted easily. Don't dwell to much on him though, it will do more harm than good (Report) Reply

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