Unfinished Business Poem by Emu Getachew

Unfinished Business

Rating: 4.1


The forest fire, sneaking up with silence suggestions and
Exposing each branch to its flame
Communicating time passed; time gained; time promised
Between yesterday and tomorrow.
Triumphing solitude and lost time
Running to grab the residue of that time.
Where youth was like the autumn breeze
Fresh, seductive, rewarding, innocent and child
The forest fire that was ignited by time
Is begging for the rain to come.

First published 1999@poetry.com
© 2009 Emu Getachew

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 27 September 2009

The forest fire that was ignited by time Is begging for the rain to come..........one must have all the solutions before igniting the fire... we should know the concwquences of wht wer are doing....the fire may beignited by the but should also be calmed downby timely inverval of rain...beautiful poem with serious thought and i enjoyed it.....10 read mine no separate ways...dirvorce....anywhgere...come home

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Rehana Nazli 03 October 2009

The forest fire that was ignited by time Is begging for the rain to come. A thoughtful story of relationship between life and nature.

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Naseer Ahmed Nasir 29 September 2009

An excellent poem, Emu. The contents are rich and thought provoking.

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~ Jon London ~ 29 September 2009

A fine write my friend....You have carefully and elegantly chosen your poetic lines to express this piece with wonderful rich content......a great Job Emu...well done 10++

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Sameera Sameer 28 September 2009

no comment! I will never find the perfect words... keep it up

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Obinna Eruchie 27 September 2009

Deep with imagery and personification.

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