Unfinished Poem..Sorry, I Can'T Finish This..Thanks To All.... Poem by lady grace

Unfinished Poem..Sorry, I Can'T Finish This..Thanks To All....

Rating: 4.3


Is it the tear measures hate and love?
Is it the laughter gages one’s kindness?
Is it the fame evaluates the popularity?
Or is it the failure determines the necessity?

If there’s no end
How to determine the beginning?
If there’s no ugly
How to assess the beautiful?
If there’s no excellent
How to distinguish the fool?
If there’s no big
How can we notice small?


i will post even if this is unfinished...thnks for all...

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Eyan Desir 02 October 2009

Lazy rabbit finish the poem... Well I felt it was ok.... still a good write

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Marieta Maglas 02 October 2009

excellent abstract poem, thank you for sharing..10++++++++++

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Raj Arumugam 03 October 2009

good qns that invite thinking, Grace

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 05 October 2009

How to assess the beautiful? If there’s no excellent How to distinguish the fool? If there’s no big.................unruly may never rule but only beautiful and intellegent...there is an end to everythig and everything ends so quickly too.....lovely write...10

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~ Jon London ~ 11 October 2009

Well, I've known you not to finish what you start out to do....So much logic to this poem Naizz, and I know you have the poetic skill, and soul to complete this loving wonder.....Keep at it sweetheart....you can do it....I know you can ;)

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Noel Horlanda 11 October 2009

finish this piece dear lady...you're on the right track 'cause you asked logical questions.

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Marvin Brato 09 October 2009

Maybe unfinished.... but the sentiments it expresses have done it all!

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C. P. Sharma 06 October 2009

Where is the beginning? Where is the end? Do we know from where The love descends? Or we just condescend! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! CP

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Ying Escalona 05 October 2009

What is time without love? What is love without time? What's the highest mountain like Without a valley nestled at its feet? What's a river without a bend To guide its flow to where it should end? What am I without you? What is life without love? Well, it's me with all the time, Time to think about the love We hardly had the time to share; Now my life's without love Our love just never had time, Now we've run out of moments To save our love in time What is pleasure without pain? What is sunshine with no rain? What's the moon without the sun To take its place when night is gone? If the sea were without the sky, Just where would the horizon lie? What's hello without goodbye? What is life without you? Well, it's me with all the time, Time to think about the love We hardly had the time to share; Though my life's without love You are my love for all time, Though we've run out of moments To save our love in time Though my life's without love You are my love for all time Though we've run out of moments To save our love in time

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