Unheard Song Poem by sekharan pookkat

Unheard Song

Rating: 5.0


Memories laced in golden reels
Marginalised over the shining stars
Kept behind the grassy mountains
Compress them in the waves of ocean.

Waves tuned one by one
And covered my sorrows and emotions
Haunted me in dawn and dusk
Like a devil wrapped my sins forever.

Efforts to break the hidden desires
From the oasis of the leaking sky
And thought about the sins I made
Endless moves to reconcile them.
Converged in one point of inertia
Like a mountain to protect my mind
And dispersed its colours from the shining eyes

Silly quarrels for ways and means
Depicted the frames of charges against him
Walked away looking back to my corridor
And he gave up all he owned to me.

A drop of blood rolled down from his eyes
And I ignored it in my total agony against him
Today I realize his love and grace towards me
In his absence I repent and recall him to share my life.

I heard a sweet soft melody coming far behind
Touched and passed me slowly to calm my mind
He slept for ever from my greedy thoughts
But I know he has no return to my life again.

Monday, May 30, 2016
Topic(s) of this poem: life and death
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Edward Kofi Louis 30 May 2016

Hidden desires! ! With the memories of life. Nice work.

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Hazel Durham 31 May 2016

Deep, dark and complex write with great imagery and thanks for sharing!

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Nullify your sins by positive gestures, we err but should learn to rectify to live our life wisely. You have got more information, spontaneously it flows keep sharing more and more, thank you dear poet

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Anne Yun 07 June 2016

'Darkling i listen; and, for many a time I have been half in love with easeful Death, called him soft names in many a mused rhyme' Darkness is like a shadow of death, sing us lullabies from time to time, then wake us up and send back to life. It's mesmerizing power will endow you endless creativity, like this impressive piece of yours.

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Sranisha Francis 02 June 2016

I heard a sweet soft melody coming far behind Touched and passed me slowly to calm my mind He slept for ever from my greedy thoughts But I know he has no return to my life again. very nice, i liked it so much......

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Bharati Nayak 01 June 2016

During life time we may not know the value of some one we are close to.Quarrel over petty matters or ego conflicts may distance loved ones.A deep repentance comes when one realises the injustice done to the loved one. The poet is full of repentance and realises the love and grace of someone whom he misunderstood in the past. A lovely write, thanks for sharing.And Congratulations for your 200th poem.

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Silly quarrels for ways and means......never to return greedy thoughts, self realisation, is the redeem, ridden off the beaten track, well penned, excellent work dear poet, congratulations on ur 200 th poem, well done keep rocking, thanks for the share

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