Unicorn's Gore … 2710-2k12 Poem by saadat tahir

Unicorn's Gore … 2710-2k12



Say!
You kill by a thousand cuts?
Veiled
innuendo in far off huts
Amid
pines, breeze and acorn nuts
drifting
sounds of impatient ruts

Oh!
If deaths come with such adore
Myself
shall I, the reaper implore
By
the unicorn be so happily gore
be
writ on walls as a figure of lore

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27 Oct,2k12
Islamabad.

POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
she says she kills.....slowly deliberately heartlessly.... :)
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Jahan Zeb 28 October 2012

I liked the s sound in the first part of the poem in cuts nuts huts and ruts. they feel so musical. The theme is treated well and the flow and rhythm has made it sweeter. Good write

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The Reader 28 October 2012

The real beauty of your poem gets highlighted by this beautiful line added in the poet's notes zbout the poem... :)

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