Unkept (Remastered To Be True To The Roundel Format.) Poem by Stevie Taite

Unkept (Remastered To Be True To The Roundel Format.)



In attempt to stop her stashes in any fitting crevice
A thousand telling tones, lost with bravado through eyelashes
Battered, head bowed to deflect all adult menace
a message missing target, in attempt to stop her stashes

Must just love the sound of flapping tongue lashes
What befitting impetus would set a pride in place
Grooves are wearing thin, needle sparks and flashes

barricade the flood land and she will drown in her misplace
Build a tide of tidy-less, forego the constant clashes
Would she bale a sinking ship and welcome her new found space?
A message missing target, in attempt to stop her stashes

POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Big fat rhyming scheme oversight the first time. My daughter is still just as messy however.: -) x
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Gajanan Mishra 21 February 2013

New found space - welcome. I like it.

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Stevie Taite

Stevie Taite

Kent, England
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