Unopened Rose Poem by Carlos Wever

Unopened Rose

Rating: 5.0


At first glance,
An unopened rose never shows its true beauty
At first try,
It’s impossible to touch a shooting star
The first time we’ve met,
I didn’t know how gorgeous you could be

Just like the unopened rose,
I know after time, the unopened rose turns into a beautiful rose
A shooting may never be touched,
But it’s possible to get closer

A shooting star comes and goes once in a while
And I know it’s impossible to bring it for you
But if you get the chance to glance at it,
You will know what beauty is.

Also an unopened rose bloom once in a while
But each time the rose is in blossom,
You can really appreciate the beauty of it

Just like an unopened rose,
You are my unopened rose,
Some one who you deeply want to meet and keep meeting
Just like the rose opening with each day that passes,
you become more precious each day to me
But unlike an unopened rose that comes and goes,
You will stay forever in my heart and mind.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Madi Maxwell 29 May 2009

That's so sweet I love it

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Fluent, melodious and mellifluous words, and literally poetic.10.

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