Unrequieted Love. Poem by J.A McManus

Unrequieted Love.



You had me where you wanted me
I was a slave to your sultry charms
I always dreamed of holding you
So close within my warm, willing arms.

You were my one beam of sunshine
You always put a smile on my face
I would have done anything for
Just one kiss or one tender embrace.

I bet you were laughing inside
As you strung me along with such ease
But now I see your promises
Are as fruitless as the autumn trees.

So now I’ve rid myself of you
I feel as free as a white winged dove
For, no longer do I hold the
Burden of my unrequited love.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Clara Odelia Ciutara 02 February 2010

What a lovely poem this is! ! ! John, you wrote in a nice way... Sorry for being so long - I was sick...

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Fay Slimm 17 January 2010

This is a fresh and imaginative verse - - has a free flow and the transition from stanza to stanza is well thought out. The title too sums up the chosen theme - well written.

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J.A McManus

J.A McManus

Carlisle, Cumbria
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