Unsatisfied Poem by Vivek Haldar

The soul of pure love will always satisfy us..

looked confused and said, 'Why do you want my soul when my body is at your service O! Poet? ' I looked away from her, i wonder and wander in thoughts how u expressed this over....well written...

very interesting. as a poet, the wording and organization thereof is unyielding and flows strong. for the concept, I am equally enamored. it displays classic motifs of the wondering soul in need of purpose, quelled by an answer that a certain type of love is the purpose, (though to whom it is directed is unclear...well done on that part as the journey (or vessel) I deem more important than destination) , and finally, the conclusion will remain true in the sands of time in its resounding negative tone. the existential soul is forced to search again for meaning, as it should be. well done.

very interesting. as a poet, the wording and organization thereof is unyielding and flows strong. for the concept, I am equally enamored. it displays classic motifs of the wondering soul in need of purpose, quelled by an answer that a certain type of love is the purpose, (though to whom it is directed is unclear...well done on that part as the journey (or vessel) I deem more important than destination) , and finally, the conclusion will remain true in the sands of time in its resounding negative tone. the existential soul is forced to search again for meaning, as it should be. well done.

Yeah U're right the real emotions and beautiful love is what we need, nothing else, I love it 10++ I respect ur choice of writing such poem like this :)

Great poem. Good write.