Unsatisfied Poem by Melanie Emikohe

Unsatisfied

Rating: 5.0


It feels like pain, it might be love,
punching the heart with holes
to breathe but too small to satisfy.

I lick a taste of it but scarce;
gasping for more to fill the space,
to get ecstatic, wild, intoxicated.

I weep before it gets to climax;
the road's too clueless to follow
that I eventually surrender.

To the hell with Love or Pain,
to cold hearts that hesitate,
too standard to override a moment

or too cocksure that one's heart
is infinitely patient, like the current
that always follows the stream.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Vincent Levine 23 July 2018

Wow! Great poem. Is it pain or is it love? There is a fine line, but it has to be drawn... to get ecstatic, wild, intoxicated. That is the goal-

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Melanie Emiko 23 July 2018

True. Thank you.

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Prasanna Kumari 16 September 2006

i feel the agony and ecstasy of pain in your poem

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