Unseen Wall Poem by Tirupathi Chandrupatla

Unseen Wall

Rating: 4.8


between you
and me
there is
an unseen wall

o god i feel it
i feel its presence

i hope to cross
this barrier
and reach you
and reach you soon.

Thursday, February 12, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: god
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Dr Dillip K Swain 11 December 2022

What a beautiful poem! O god i feel it....I can imagine the feelings of the poet. Nicely put.

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Valsa George 17 February 2015

Break barriers and reach out! This should be the mantra of modern man who doesn't even know his immediate neighbour! Sweet little write!

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Savita Tyagi 13 February 2015

Very nice. Breaking barriers and reaching out to others is the demand and need of each and every person.

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