Unsettled Poem by Rema Prasanaa

Unsettled

Rating: 2.9


Unsettled
Rema Prasanna

Mind strained on memories
Transient rays react faster
Reflectors of life lucid
Far more than survival
A struggle for reign
Caused a twinge
Grades scored and resolved
In a resolute mission
Organs overworked and fractured
Aged and dissipated
Pain not a presumption
When wheels crack and slow down
Desiccated desires distorted
Life lines end in disturbing rhythm
Recapture not the easiest
Trial one habitual restraint
Wings dithered on abnormal heights
Failed to fly but hopes triumphed

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
rohit sapra 14 July 2008

This poem is nice as if I am not wrong it talks about hopes and memories which in my view are probably the only thing one is left with.

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Vidyadhar Durgekar 10 May 2008

Intesting write............................

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