I suppose one-day life will get better,
I wonder if John will come back to me?
He really shouldn't have gone,
Life is awful without him.
My headaches,
I feel so tired all the time
I forgot my doctors appointment.
Mother will be arriving soon,
I must put the kettle on.
I must take an aspirin.
Last year John and I went to the theatre to see
'Shirley somebody or other.'
The roses were blooming, it rained buckets.
John and I could go to the beach.
I forgot to get bread and milk; I'll have to go out.
I wish the postman would come.
I expect the tide will be out.
I must do the ironing
Maybe there is a letter from John.
I've got no money,
I didn't do it last week, too many clothes.
I forgot to go to the bank.
I have such a headache,
It was 'Valentine'.
I have a toothache.
Mother will be hear shortly.
Put the kettle on, she'll expect cake.
I must take two aspirins.
The bakers wife died last week, cancer.
Oh dear, I have no tea never mind cake.
Maybe there will be a letter from John.
The dentist should have phoned me.
She'd been ill for quite awhile.
Expect not, he never writes.
I forgot my birthday last week.
The funerals tomorrow,
I expect mother will be late.
He really should not have left me.
I did'nt get a card from John.
Everybody will wear black.
I had a dentists appointment this morning.
She usually is late.
I forgot to get the car from the garage.
I hope she does'nt come.
I must take three aspirin.
Its been there since last week.
I have such a headache.
The mechanic said I really should learn to drive
I wish John was here.
It was not my fault I did'nt see the other car.
I expect life will get better.
It was green or was it red?
There's mother at the door.
I wish she'd go away.
If only John would come back.
She is so critical of me.
I feel awful.
Who is that knocking at my door.
I suppose one day life will get better
BOB, This is an excellent poem on 'unsettled mind'! I find in it part fantasy and part reality! 'John' is the recurrent theme which links up all the stray verses like a running thread giving the poem its unity! Is John the son? I find it difficult to control my chattering mind! Even when I go to bed, at times it keeps me awake till late! 10++ -Raj Nandy
This is a brilliant write Bob - what a topic, interesting read.
Bob this is brilliant. Do we ever see ourselves as others see us? An unsettled mind for sure, so very well written Ten from Fay.
an unsettled mind settles down to write...this beautifully touching poem, in brief, is a card to john...john, who left, not to receive this to read...the three lines commencing 'He really should not...' are painful and poetic...ten grade
Bob, if one is going to write a poem about an unsettled mind...I suggest they do it like this. Wonderful piece of writing. Best regards, Ian
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Yes you have portrayed a very unsettled mind.