Unstable Poem by Phil Soar

Unstable

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When I was five she took me by the hand
And said that I was mental and unstable
She said she’d hit me until I could not stand
And banged my head upon the kitchen table
She said that Hatton was the place for me
Now I am mad and nearly sixty-three
Hatton was an asylum full of twits
Her bad remarks had left my soul in bits

Monday, March 9, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: life
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kenneth Maswabi 09 March 2015

truly poetic, sad and inspirational piece of poetry

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Jak Black 09 March 2015

A great poem, extremely well written. Hope this isn't written from past experience though.

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