Untitled Poem by Jhane Reyes

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Rating: 5.0


Dying in pain feel through my vein
Doubts and fears start to reign
Happy and hurting memories still remain
This silly fate makes me insane

Now look above and talk the moon
That keep in shining while heart in mourn
A song of dawn can mend it soon
And bring back the life that wrecked and torn

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Mohammad Akmal Nazir 15 May 2011

Nice rythmic flow. Awesome work. Great imagery with nice style. Great write indeed. I rate it 10. TFS. Please read and rate my poem 'A humble complaint' on page 2

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