Untitled But Deep Poem by Chanelle Fields

Untitled But Deep

Rating: 2.8


I’ll never be like you

To let yourself fall into a bottomless pit

You’ve let your guard down

And now you’re a victim like the rest of them

So there is no love, only pain and misery

Afraid of the future and what is it to become of you.

You’ve let them in and destroy your mental status

You cry out for help, but can’t be found

You only shed blood and tears

To believe that this could be your sanctuary or your grave

Your bones dissolve from your feet and up

But screams of terror and deaths remain

For this is now your grave

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Emu Getachew 30 September 2009

The line 'your bones dissolve from your feet and up' oooooooooooohhhhhhh it send chill to my essence. thanks for the invite.Very Powerful! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! !

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