Untittled Poem by Fredoneth Jonelas

Fredoneth Jonelas

Fredoneth Jonelas

Centro Poblacion, Culasi,5708 Antique, Philippines

Untittled

Rating: 4.8


Walking alone in the middle of the darkness night,
Where did I go if no one is in my sight.?
Lonely night scares my path through light.
Light which I seeks in my whole life.

In the way to my destined point,
In the cross road called friends,
I found a shadows called choices,
Who assists me side by side.

I thought this cross road leads me to light,
In the middle, some still others left.
Some lift me up others pull me down.
Not knowing ideal friends, will end to lost.

Walking without the right path,
This cross roads may drag you to the deep.
It may give meaning to the world called life.
And it may trigger destruction called insanity.

POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
(Life Poems)

Life is a meaningful word. A broad in definition, but a gift from God above to pursue the duty of man.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Indranil Bhaduri 24 September 2012

Wonderful.. we get confused choosing our paths as we walk through the streets of life.Very well expressed.

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Fredoneth Jonelas 25 September 2012

This is one of my projects before.. now I am compiling this through PoemHunter because I might lose this someday.. thank you for the like...

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Kelvin Owusu 28 September 2012

another great piece, enjoyable read, this is nicely structured

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Erika Wingo 28 September 2012

I find this to be so true in life. Some of the many struggles that we all face at one time or another. Very relatable and very nicely written.

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Darkangel Flyfree 28 September 2012

I like this one, there are always some who can bring us down and then there are the one's who can always bring us back up again! Excellent poem!

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Fredoneth Jonelas 28 September 2012

I am just a student sir. Thanks for the compliments

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Allemagne Roßmann 28 September 2012

Superb write and very well penned Sir

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Fredoneth Jonelas

Fredoneth Jonelas

Centro Poblacion, Culasi,5708 Antique, Philippines
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