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Unto the next morn! !
Never faltering!
Confidence the high wave
That took him
Over the crescendo
With the flow
Of lashing waves
In the presence of the gazing stars
Having forgotten to blink
For seconds together! !
He enjoyed the eyes
On his departing bent back
The smile mischievous…..
Transitory humour! !
Skies threw a spanner at work
Torrents poured non stop
But he plodded on…..
The left stood gaping
The right gossiping
He strode straight up
His chosen path
Soon the folks followed
Not that all agreed
Yet his saucy spirits
Had those, “all hooked! “
The blazing Sun
Across the edge of the far west
To triumphant rise in the east
All task timely put to place
Back in time for his day’s work
Bold, brave as ever
Blazing a track through
All gloomy darkness
Waking the sleeping spirits awake!
Bringing new goodness
New hope
Into the morning!
maalini kadir
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Thursday, January 08, 2009 |
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Monday, May 17, 2010 |
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Comments about this poem (Unto the next morn!
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maalini kadir
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Kesav Easwaran (1/9/2009 10:09:00 AM)
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speaking imagery on the Day Maker in a beautifully worded frame...the visuals you created here are marvelous, Hema...thanks for this nice poem portrait...10
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