Untold Art Of Love Poem by Dr subhendu kar

Untold Art Of Love

Rating: 3.9


UNTOLD ART OF LOVE

soul rejoices by enlightened grace,
virile breeze smooches passion by mirth
heart touches tunes even million miles apart
earthly rhythm seems to reel thorough red

fear of falling never baffles grace of love
as the beauty of grace overpowers sorrow
when reef of reason entices upon the blue
words of thirsty desire rambles bewildered

fire never finds distinction of new ands old
as the skin of love inebriates by Midas touch
today forsakes yesterday into to furrows of time
breath expires slowly into future uncertain

yet grave fails to consume the art of love
as fairy tales are the legends unto this day
patience still holds on like stillness of stone
halcyon meanders beyond bitten by moments

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
James Mclain 03 December 2008

This is a very good write that I enjoyed very much thank you..

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Thad Wilk 03 December 2008

Ahh your so right Dr. Kar, nothing can consume the art of love, this thirsty desire will - never expire! Best wishes! *10*! ! Friend Thad

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<font color =fusha>Amy 05 December 2008

i loved it. Nice use of emotive language. =)

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Kassem Oude 05 December 2008

I am amazed by this poem, it is too beautiful, It contains very nice imagery and tender ideas.

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S. Kool 06 December 2008

Wow, it's amazing! very deep, and meaningful... like it has some sort of hidden message.

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Nivedita Bagchi SPC UK 30 April 2010

‘fear of falling never baffles grace of love ‘ Fear keeps love far Pulls back splendorous spur Augmenter of mar Volutes into despair. -niv This is a fine diction…wonderful coinage and ambiance… Voted 10++ Ms. Nivedita UK

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Rachel Butler 28 October 2009

'Soul rejoices by enlightened grace' Rachel Ann Butler

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asma Jone 07 December 2008

Oh this very beautiful

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Nina H-s 07 December 2008

really nice and very deep- lots of expression :) rateing: 9

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Amanda Macri 06 December 2008

Hello Dr. Subhendu Kar, You asked me to read your poem and I think that it's very deep, brilliant and meaningful. Thanks.

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Dr subhendu kar

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Bhubaneswar, Odissa, India
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