Untold Story Poem by Asif Baloch

Untold Story

Rating: 5.0


Come with me
I show you thee
the shadow beneath
the candle dance

to me and thee
it hope to abod
and lighten up
the darkened night

but when I asked
the saddened beauty
how it feels to
stand still and stare upright

she speak to me
with tearful smile
shattered hopes
and yearn full sighs

long was the last night, asif
still longer will be tomorrow night
stricken, sad and smitten with grief
I long for pure and love filled sight

breeze is blowing cold
still colder is my inner side
I give light and heat to world, but
beneath my feet is cold and shivering night

for me no pleasure can exceed
my heart is like an open book
yet you can see through my burning heart
but still give me a fearful look

alas! the light you see, dear
is not a burning flame
it is my heart that glows
cause of my lonesome fame

loneliness is curse
and I'm cursed by fate
you will come to know for sure, when
all prayers and pleads will be turned down
from heaven's gate

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Obed Souza 31 July 2009

It´s the cry of the lonely heart... I´ve learn to lean on the heart of silence, and I´ve learned a lot from it...

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Anjali Sinha 03 June 2009

loneliness is curse and I'm cursed by fate you will come to know for sure, when all prayers and pleads will be turned down from heaven's gate hey asif no loneliness arnt we all there with you then why that loneliness wowwwwww the pathos of that loneliness nicely brought out in this poem a tenner from meeeeeee anjuuuuu

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Shashendra Amalshan 02 June 2009

'loneliness is curse and I'm cursed by fate you will come to know for sure, when all prayers and pleads will be turned down from heaven's gate' dear Asif...this is a very moving touching one indeed//felt every line...I was chastised with the same curse the day i came to the site...if you read my poem 'The Mesmerizing Chainsaw'....you will understand the pain i was in the day i came to the site....but the site can heal to a certain extent.....but i know i will never feel same....thanks for sharing your feelings with me.... wish you every happiness//cheers for the happiness of both of us, , , ... poignant one

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Lady Grace 02 June 2009

'loneliness is curse and I'm cursed by fate' this poem is really beautiful..the way of presentation is different.it is unique and expressive..grace

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Ashraful Musaddeq 02 June 2009

'breeze is blowing cold still colder is my inner side I give light and heat to world, but beneath my feet is cold and shivering night' Don't feel alone, we are with you man. You have nicely composed this touching piece. 10+++

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