Unveiled Poem by Romeo Della Valle

read mists of avalon.... it's a book that talks more about this... a little based on christiananity taking over the world and it's falseness, but it also talks about truths, and as they say a truth may be seen as a lie in many instances, infact your very religion may be a lie if another sees it that way..... so as i say 'each to their own truth'. I liked this poem, i really do. I love the language you used, old fashioned, love it! :) I am far too old fashioned myself not to enjoy this poem, thankyou, it's been a while since i've seen one like this.

certainly, a crowd of clouds cannot let a moving jet. Good work dear...10v

The lie is disclosed Defrauded-exposed very touching lines but sometimes lies are a catalyst for truths.Present day world is running on lies like the war on terror for USAs hunt for Afghanistan being helped by 39 another countries including NATO-ISAF and USAs biggest feet lickers since WW2 help against Germany-the UK.But the truth is people from Afghanistan want not become cheap labour to softwares in the name of development like what India and China are doing for the West in IT and manufacture areas.People from Afghanistan are sole freedom loving people-the Pushtoons are free people like free birds.The British tried before with sending people from India there 3 times 1839,1879 and 1919 as what is known as Anglo-Afghan wars with all sorts of lies in the name of schools for children, hospitals for olds, workplaces for graduates.But the question remains who will control all these places through telecom and air bases meant commecialization but actually are only plans behind to start control stations for waging wars against China, Russia, Pakistan using India as a trump card and thereby the destruction of the East with Asia as the largest known continent ruining from losses irreparable.So big USSR did not understand this from British lessons where afghans used to kill all indian and english soldiers like mosquitoes before and would leave one injured belligerent alive to refrain and give back the news to be written as history and annals of english diaries.The British administration when failed drew only lines of demarcation b/w India and Pakistan or together which was India and then Durand Line in Afghan-Pak border in the Khyber areas which US mudsling as federally administered.But Afghanistan wants not federal administration to build air bases checking its oil and energy consumption and bounties of fuel stolen from Iraq to massacre human beings for supremacy using Israel who never had a way back to Germany wherefrom they created themselves as american puppet.Now is Obama administration with debts.Before was George William Bush whose grandfather people say funded Hitler for Holocaust.Next will be an afghan becoming President of USA being reared up in the USA and born there with US passport and amenities with only the name Afghan but ideologies not for Afghan people of Afghanistan.For Afghans then this Afghan man is a liar like what Kenya would think over Mr.Obama and for this Afghan American President the motto for his name to live in wikipaedia as Americas most prestigious president will be send army and say to the world 'All Afghans are liars' and born to be federally administered and killed.From that context this poem is well written and thought of. Best wishes and regards from UK.Do read my HAIKUs- 'A Success' and 'A Demise'.Hope you will enjoy and hope God finds you in good spirit and health.Cheers.Hasta maniana.

Wow! that was truely beautiful the words you used worked very well together.. Thanks for sharing your poem. Keep up the great poems. Diana Fischer

Such a heartfelt poem, Romeo. Life brings so many emotions.10! Best Wishes, Marilyn