Dave Alan Walker

Silver Star - 3,887 Points (Pudsey, Leeds)

Unwritten Soul - Poem by Dave Alan Walker

Unwritten soul
Is my kind of man
Or is he a woman
Unwritten will never tell

When i'm feeling down
Unable to stop the frown
I think of unwritten
And the smiles
The soul gave to me

I'm your friend
I'm your brother
I will always respect you
For the smiles
And the poetry
You gave to me

I send this
With my love my friend
To thank you for the smile


Comments about Unwritten Soul by Dave Alan Walker

  • Gold Star - 14,919 Points * Sunprincess * (4/15/2014 6:41:00 PM)

    ......a beautiful tribute to one of ph's best poet/poetess.....who really knows? ? ? ? ? ? ? (Report) Reply

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  • Gold Star - 9,023 Points Geetha Jayakumar (2/24/2014 12:31:00 PM)

    A Beautiful poem on Unwirtten soul..Beautiful are the poems and comments written by Unwritten Soul. Whether he or she doesn't matter. Let us hope Unwritten Soul comes with new poems once again.....Thanks for this beautiful poem. (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 1,228 Points Thomas A Robinson (9/2/2013 1:08:00 PM)

    Soul, dear soul, wants to be one of blended light. A perfection in time and certain in space.
    And should be respected for who/what he/ she stands for. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 10 Points Colin J... (5/11/2013 10:24:00 AM)

    Read your poem Unwritten Soul Thought provoking...
    are you aware there is a poet called Unwritten Soul on poemhunter...
    Colin J... (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 204 Points Stan Petrovich (6/20/2012 2:31:00 AM)

    Yes, we must appreciate all artists, good, bad, indifferent, because what they ply is really the future of theworld - beside the smiles! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 213 Points Siyabonga A Nxumalo (4/22/2012 9:19:00 AM)

    Wow! big brother, this is a masterpiece and the fact that its a tribute to my dearest friend puts the cherry on top....excellent write Dave... (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Monday Ogeleka (1/15/2012 7:12:00 AM)

    Mr walker, i like your poem and am new are can we be friends? (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 4 Points Lawrence H (1/13/2012 6:50:00 AM)

    Dave,

    Very good poem dedicated to your friend. Again direct to the points, clear and easy to understand and simple reading...I love this poem so much.. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 0 Points Greg Uhan (12/27/2011 2:14:00 AM)

    Great work Dave, heartfelt tribute. Male or female? I say both, unwritten is a full bodied being beyond any conception of earthly gender, as we are all. Keep spreading the love. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 226 Points Vipins Puthooran (12/1/2011 4:40:00 AM)

    It's a wonderful poem like Unwritten soul-the e'er Ist unseen best friend of mine...
    U.S is n't a human but a soul, , , I love soul!
    Dear poet, I thank you for written my soul's name here! ! ! ! ! !
    Top marks! ! ! ! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 0 Points Richard McClellan (10/29/2011 8:46:00 AM)

    I agree with Jinal, very inspiring, I think the soul could be female too... (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 31 Points Jinal Oswal (10/19/2011 5:54:00 AM)

    Soul is a good friend, an inspiration, a thinker who always contributes.... Its very sweet of you, you shared it with us: D (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 10 Points Colin J... (10/18/2011 3:04:00 PM)

    Yes, I think in a male the soul could be female...
    A sort of alter ego...
    Who Knows...
    Good one...
    Colin J... (Report) Reply

  • Rookie (De Va) (10/18/2011 10:39:00 AM)

    again, very beautiful....Love you work... (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 63 Points Eric Cockrell (10/16/2011 10:46:00 AM)

    amen to that... and my own thanks as well! good poem for a bringer of joy! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Asif Andalib (10/16/2011 2:54:00 AM)

    Unwritten Soul is one of favorite persons too. I also wonder is he a she. Anyway it's a beautiful poem and he or she deserves it. Thanks for sharing. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Jacqui Broad (10/16/2011 2:38:00 AM)

    This made me smile so thank you for telling me where to go when I also need sunshine. If you don't mind sharing... :) Beautiful ode... (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 1,269 Points Unwritten Soul (10/15/2011 9:56:00 PM)

    Love it...As much as i read it the more smiles i have here..I'm not human Dave, i am a soul hahahaha, when you feeling down you should not keep down, afraid you will go deep in down...climb up for any reason you can, people say 'An apple a day make doctor away' that's for health, but for soul healer ' A smile in every hour make sadness no place to stay' hahahahaha...thank you my brother, it really a sweet candy, but it will never rot my teeth :) thank you for send this to me, and i love you too my brother, and well here live to love not to hate_Unwritten Soul (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Stefanie Fontker (10/15/2011 3:02:00 PM)

    Aw. Yes, you're very right. Unwritten Soul is a true sweetheart, and so are you to write something so beautiful for him. Great poetry, I love this. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Saturday, October 15, 2011

Poem Edited: Saturday, February 4, 2012


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