Dave Alan Walker

Freshman - 1,426 Points (Pudsey, Leeds)

Unwritten Soul


Unwritten soul
Is my kind of man
Or is he a woman
Unwritten will never tell

When i'm feeling down
Unable to stop the frown
I think of unwritten
And the smiles
The soul gave to me

I'm your friend
I'm your brother
I will always respect you
For the smiles
And the poetry
You gave to me

I send this
With my love my friend
To thank you for the smile

Submitted: Saturday, October 15, 2011
Edited: Saturday, February 04, 2012

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  • Bronze Star - 5,319 Points Geetha Jayakumar (2/24/2014 12:31:00 PM)

    A Beautiful poem on Unwirtten soul..Beautiful are the poems and comments written by Unwritten Soul. Whether he or she doesn't matter. Let us hope Unwritten Soul comes with new poems once again.....Thanks for this beautiful poem. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 781 Points Thomas A Robinson (9/2/2013 1:08:00 PM)

    Soul, dear soul, wants to be one of blended light. A perfection in time and certain in space.
    And should be respected for who/what he/ she stands for. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 0 Points Colin J... (5/11/2013 10:24:00 AM)

    Read your poem Unwritten Soul Thought provoking...
    are you aware there is a poet called Unwritten Soul on poemhunter...
    Colin J... (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 141 Points Stan Petrovich (6/20/2012 2:31:00 AM)

    Yes, we must appreciate all artists, good, bad, indifferent, because what they ply is really the future of theworld - beside the smiles! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 120 Points Siyabonga A Nxumalo (4/22/2012 9:19:00 AM)

    Wow! big brother, this is a masterpiece and the fact that its a tribute to my dearest friend puts the cherry on top....excellent write Dave... (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Lawrence H (1/13/2012 6:50:00 AM)

    Dave,

    Very good poem dedicated to your friend. Again direct to the points, clear and easy to understand and simple reading...I love this poem so much.. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 0 Points Greg Uhan (12/27/2011 2:14:00 AM)

    Great work Dave, heartfelt tribute. Male or female? I say both, unwritten is a full bodied being beyond any conception of earthly gender, as we are all. Keep spreading the love. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 61 Points Vipins Puthooran (12/1/2011 4:40:00 AM)

    It's a wonderful poem like Unwritten soul-the e'er Ist unseen best friend of mine...
    U.S is n't a human but a soul, , , I love soul!
    Dear poet, I thank you for written my soul's name here! ! ! ! ! !
    Top marks! ! ! ! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 1 Points Jinal Oswal (10/19/2011 5:54:00 AM)

    Soul is a good friend, an inspiration, a thinker who always contributes.... Its very sweet of you, you shared it with us: D (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 0 Points Colin J... (10/18/2011 3:04:00 PM)

    Yes, I think in a male the soul could be female...
    A sort of alter ego...
    Who Knows...
    Good one...
    Colin J... (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Asif Andalib (10/16/2011 2:54:00 AM)

    Unwritten Soul is one of favorite persons too. I also wonder is he a she. Anyway it's a beautiful poem and he or she deserves it. Thanks for sharing. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Jacqui Broad (10/16/2011 2:38:00 AM)

    This made me smile so thank you for telling me where to go when I also need sunshine. If you don't mind sharing... :) Beautiful ode... (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 840 Points Unwritten Soul (10/15/2011 9:56:00 PM)

    Love it...As much as i read it the more smiles i have here..I'm not human Dave, i am a soul hahahaha, when you feeling down you should not keep down, afraid you will go deep in down...climb up for any reason you can, people say 'An apple a day make doctor away' that's for health, but for soul healer ' A smile in every hour make sadness no place to stay' hahahahaha...thank you my brother, it really a sweet candy, but it will never rot my teeth :) thank you for send this to me, and i love you too my brother, and well here live to love not to hate_Unwritten Soul (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Stefanie Fontker (10/15/2011 3:02:00 PM)

    Aw. Yes, you're very right. Unwritten Soul is a true sweetheart, and so are you to write something so beautiful for him. Great poetry, I love this. (Report) Reply

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