Us Amongst The Crowd (Tanka) Poem by Mihaela Pirjol

Us Amongst The Crowd (Tanka)



standing transfixed and
aware of my racing heart—
irrational words
are intruders against us
but they saved myself from swoon

Tuesday, September 13, 2016
Topic(s) of this poem: words,emotions,love
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Rajesh Thankappan 15 September 2016

Irrational words though trespassers and intrudes acts as a safety net. A nice and in-depth thoughts. Loved it.

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Edward Kofi Louis 13 September 2016

From swoon! Thanks for sharing.

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