'Us' Were One Poem by Brittany Graviet

'Us' Were One

Rating: 4.8


In dreams embrace,
We intertwined.
There was no me.
There was no you.
and 'us' were one.

In your smiles sweet hope,
I embarked.
I met your soul,
and you found mine.
and 'us' were one.

In my laughing breath,
Your heart ascended.
Your love was mine,
While I was yours.
and 'us' were one.

In deaths loving sleep,
I followed you.
Your ghost danced,
and mine did too.
and 'us' were one.

Eternity let us be,
and 'us' were one.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Ency Bearis 10 September 2008

a profound verses...repeating (and us were one) ...getting into main message.. great... Ency Bearis

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Stacey Watts 09 September 2008

Wow an eternal love story very cool. I think this is an excellent piece..

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