Valentine's Afternoon Poem by Michael McFee

Valentine's Afternoon

Rating: 4.3


Four lanes over, a plump helium heart—

slipped, maybe, from some kid's wrist
or a rushed lover's empty front seat

through a half-cracked car window—

rises like a shiny purple cloudlet
toward today's gray mess of clouds,

trailing its gold ribbon like lightning

that will never strike anything
or anyone here on the forsaken ground,

its bold LOVE increasingly illegible

as it ascends over the frozen oaks,
riding swift currents toward the horizon,

a swollen word wobbling out of sight.

Tuesday, February 9, 2016
Topic(s) of this poem: love
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Savita Tyagi 14 February 2016

Lovely poem. A simple moment of ordinary life immortalized.

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Barry Middleton 14 February 2016

LOVE it. We have all seen the random escaping balloon. Love has finally broken the bonds of earth.,

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Michael McFee

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