Valentine's Without You Poem by Shahad Raad

Valentine's Without You

Rating: 5.0


In the Night of Valentine's.
The lovers recreate and drinking wine.
The candles floodlight the the tables when they dine
in the star-full sky the love moon shines

Despite me
In is the Night of Valentine's.
Im crying, Wiping my tears
I'm dying & saying that I'm fine

In the Night of Valentine's.
You said that u'll return tomorrow
and now it's 2009
When will u come?
till when I should wait?
please' just give me a sign
It is the night of valentine's

Do you hear me?

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Bob Blackwell 23 July 2009

Separations are full of longing's for return of loved one, your cry I hope is heard.

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Melissa Thompson 15 May 2009

I like your style.nice

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Maxim Muyu 21 February 2009

This is all very great and I love the great syle contained in it.

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Sandy Vanity 17 February 2009

that was a very sad poem and i loved i realy felt it and i know how it feels.

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Fay Slimm 17 February 2009

A sad cry from the heart Shahad - - but well written and has some apt phrases which describe the night very well...... a 10 from me - best wishes from Fay...

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