Valley Of Tears Poem by Satish Verma

Valley Of Tears

Rating: 4.8


Beyond the gaze there is a time zone
of rumored agitation
when you cannot sleep.
You open your eyes quietly to complain.

The caretaker has prepared the shroud.
Smoke is rising on the hills.
No body walks with you,
it is a lone journey, where
centuries throw the dust on your hallowed gifts.

The pyramid of signs, symbols, signatures,
disappear in penultimate flare.
Time to leave the waiting room.

The resurrection will take place now;
of fear; of despair; of foot steps in dark.
I will hear them, holding my breath.

Landscape will change into valley of tears.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
James B. Earley 24 February 2008

Thank you for sharing such beautiful work. Keep writing!

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Goldy Locks 14 October 2007

daring punctuation. i love it. your closing lines could be a little stronger, unless you're going for a reference/indication to the title. `where centuries throw the dust on your hallowed gifts.' excellent placement... ~~sjg

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