Vandalism Poem by Bera Tremoz

Vandalism

Rating: 2.6


This cover design
has been done
so many times before
just had to stain it
with my own
blood
in the form of a fat
finger print
to make it look
interesting.
Next time i'll use
semen.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Angela Wright 24 October 2005

i really liked the rawness of this one. the boldness. it screams at the reader in a way- 'hear me, see me, look at me! ' bravo.

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David Gerardino 24 October 2005

BERA, AFTER READING YOUR POEM MORE THEN ONCE, im not sure what to think, its good, yet.....................

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