Vanish Poem by Carrie Sprouse

Vanish



horrified from fear
whispered voices in your ear
cold and lonsome you stand and wait
for your long and painful fate

as time fades and you start to shake
soon you won't ever awake
take this moment, hold it tite
soon you'll vanish forever from sight

tremble, shake, release your fear
times running out, hes almost here
take one last breath before it's to late
as you wait for your long and dreadful fate

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Silence Dogood 12 October 2008

Not bad but you repeated the same rhymes which made it less enjoyable

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Carrie Sprouse

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