Vanishing Bubbles Poem by Eila Mahima Jaipaul

Vanishing Bubbles



I had this thought
of showering with you
nothing between us
but vanishing bubbles
as we touch wetness
silently together.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Charles Chaim Wax 13 December 2005

what passion! the image at once sensual and tragic but that very tragedy glues two souls together without the possibly the bond can ever be dissolved a fine poem

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