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Veil Debate

From a veiled point of view:

*Because I love my love
I want him and only him
To see the beauty of my beauty
*Because I love my God
I fear his anger
And do my best
To obey His word

/It is controversial
And if it is controversial
Take the safe side


/Either/

/Or/


F rom an unveiled point of view:

*Simplify
Especially
When you are not really disobeying Him
Because He wants us
To live
An easy and simple life
His Mercy overwhelmed His Anger

/One has to choose
/And it is not an easy choice!

Submitted: Tuesday, October 20, 2009
Edited: Thursday, February 25, 2010

Comments about this poem (Veil Debate by Eman Elbadawi )

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  • Eman Elbadawi (2/27/2010 4:39:00 PM)

    This is to remind that Prophet Muhammad peace be upon him never chose between two choices except that he chose the simpler only except that this choice is a true forbidden.... and to remind that he was sent mercy for people....

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  • Aashish Ameya (10/30/2009 2:55:00 AM)

    Eman i like this...i think Veil is a thing for soul we need to hide our evil and show beauty.

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