Vengeance Poem by Antonio Liao

Vengeance

Rating: 5.0


a melodic sound,
that satisfies
the urge of
satisfaction

it is a fulfillment of
one's inner
shade of revenge

the sting that makes
every moment a
happiness to
remember

nay, my soul rejoices
in pain. a backdrop
that i bring to eternity

am i loser or a winner?

the passion that brings me
the heart to see
the end of the
beginning

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Saint Cynosure 03 July 2008

Losers dont write like this only winners do... I like this a lot, I give it a 10.

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Estrella Baldemosa 01 July 2008

i like the subtlety of this poem...

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