Venomous Words Poem by Crimson Love

Venomous Words

Rating: 5.0


If evil could speak,
You'd be its words,
Vile creature you are,
you bend unbendable wills,
You've snapped my thoughts,
with your words of evil.

Your evil speaks,
and cuts me deep,
your words so vile,
you lie a gentle kiss upon my flesh,
then bite my unpenetrable skin,
Your poisons, penetrate,
filling my veins.

like the evil that surges, this venom does to,
finally it reaches my heart,
killing me instantly,
your words like venom,
Spread so violently.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
M. Asim Nehal 09 June 2023

This is really a wonderful poem. I can't stop myself in giving 5 ***** for this poem. I think for today I had enough dose of Venom. Thank to Bri for showing me the way to this poem.

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Bri Edwards 06 June 2023

five, five,5 stars. OK, PH? ?

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Bri Edwards 06 June 2023

I found this poem while searching for one (with the allmost-identical title) of my poems which I don't see. I think PH may object to it due to some 'venomous words' I used in the poem. Hmmmmph! ! ;) bri

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Bri Edwards 06 June 2023

maybe a typo or two but I like it. ;) bri

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Lenore Lee 10 October 2011

What an extradinary poem. It pretty much describes every cruel yet petty person who uses their words to break one's soul, one's heart. I love it and hope this person one day understands what it's like to be on the other end of the scale.

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