Very Nice Make Up! Poem by Veeraiyah Subbulakshmi

Very Nice Make Up!

Rating: 5.0


Weaving the sand for the strong ropes to make a mat,
Raining makes the sky to weep and to be wet,
The rays of Sun pass through the mountain,
What my little mind can hold and ascertain,
The vector that has magnitude and direction,
Not the vector transmitting ills and illusions,
When we try to roll the mat out of wish and will,
What can you and I do, when no one care to stand still,
I am a fool, when trying to build the sand castle,
Where I try to keep my mat, made of clouds,
Blue prints of two or three addresses point the lunar,
When I knock each and every door that are closed,
We don't have to put make up even during sleep,
We have to remove it for our own good health.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM

A poem that points finger at one aspect of human folly. Well written and well crafted indeed.

0 0 Reply
Hans Vr 10 November 2012

beautifully written poem great work

0 0 Reply
Rm. Shanmugam Chettiar 10 November 2012

metaphor and similes have been aptly handled with maturity

0 0 Reply
Dave Walker 09 November 2012

A fantastic poem, like it, a great write.

0 0 Reply
READ THIS POEM IN OTHER LANGUAGES
Close
Error Success