Vi Poem by Kenny Nelson

Vi

Rating: 5.0


This womans she's got a hold of me
Takes my breath away just to hear her speak
Shes a goddess and a saint sent down to earth
Got an open heart for the poor and weak

This lady's got too much of me
Letters and photographs that she keeps
She's got a veil, for her wedding day
Says I'd look good through a white sheet

No time for me, not time for you
I've got to finish what I'm born to do
It's like a sixth sense is telling me
This will never work out

She's leaving notes and letters for me
Talking about all the things we should be
She's got a plan that I can not change
Says I'd die if I leave

Friday, July 24, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: love
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Linda A 24 July 2015

this is a difficult situation but i enjoyed reading your creative perspective on it..all i can say is i've been in a similar situation and if one persons more into the relationship than the other, someone's probably going to get their feelings hurt. And the longer you go on questioning ur relationship's future, the less likely your chances of working out are gonna be...if you're not feeling the whole bridal thing you need to let her know.

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