Vibgyor - A Splash Of Colour Poem by Sandra Martyres

Vibgyor - A Splash Of Colour

Rating: 5.0


The lovely fragrance of flowers
Pervades the whole atmosphere
Ceramic pots of little violets hang
Against the indigo coloured screens
Adorning the living room while
The blue bells thrive in the garden beds
Alongside pleasing green ferns
The yellow buttercups do attract attention
As do the orange marigolds in full bloom
But in this colourful garden
The deep red rose still retains
Pride of place

COMMENTS OF THE POEM

A gorgeous riot of color Sandra. Violet, blue bells, yellow buttercups and orange marigolds. It is picturesque. Ah! the rose is the icing of the cake. 10 Karin Anderson

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Ted M 07 August 2009

Vow! this is so beautiful. So fragrant and so colourful. It's a pleasant treat for the eyes and the wonderful fragrance makes me dream. The nature so nicely penned. V ery I nteresting B eautiful G reat Y outhful O riginal R evelation.............10+++++++

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Marieta Maglas 08 August 2009

Sandra, it is an excellent descriptive poem of color.10+++++ from me

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Meggie Gultiano 09 August 2009

a colorful write indeed..wow..i love your last line. Hugs, Meggie

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~ Jon London ~ 07 August 2009

Sandra you create such beautiful and vibrant flows of colour in this stunning creation....very refreshing piece to share my lovely....thank you...it's beautiful...but then again so is all your work 10+++

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Patrick McFarland 26 August 2009

This is a wonderful poem Sandra full of beautiful, gripping imagery. A 10+...

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Patti Masterman 25 August 2009

This is such a beautifully classic poem. Your words full of the same vibrancy and aliveness of the thing itself, true art becomes...(smile)

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Roshni D'Souza 17 August 2009

Such a beautiful piece, Sandra! Really enjoyed reading it. -roshni.

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Yelena M. 11 August 2009

Oh I just wish I could walk through such colorful garden, Sandra, something like that is so rare to find here in Russia :) I fell in deep love with the line 'The deep red rose still retains Pride of place...........'..Beautiful, thanks for sharing! Amary.

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Carl Harris 11 August 2009

This is a wonderfully well written poem celebrating the awesome color of a flower garden at it's peak, Sandra. I liked how you mentioned the delightful colors of nature in this charming poem. Carl.

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