Vicious Circle Poem by Jaideep Arora

Vicious Circle

Rating: 5.0


Insanely enough my enemy is my bed,
I lay and close my eyes and it puts ur pictures in my head,
Does it want me asleep, or it wants me awake?
Coz at times I drift to sleep and at times I see dawn break.

The way I remember you are still the same,
And acknowledging this I feel insane,
Truth be told, there's no stand I hold,
Memories taste better like the wine when it's old,

Words form in head, out comes a sigh,
And to get to sleep, I'll need to get high,
Tomorrow when I gain senses, my faith will take a leap,
Doesn't matter, by dark, your thoughts are gonna creep....

~Vicious circle

Vicious Circle
Monday, March 23, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: love and loss,memories,sad love,sleep
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Sleeplessness arising out of fond rememberance.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Chinedu Dike 23 March 2015

Lovely piece of poetry, well articulated and nicely penned. I like the line - MEMORIES TASTE BETTER LIKE THE WINE WHEN IT'S OLD. A good poem indeed. Please read my poem MANDELA - THE IMMORTAL ICON.

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