Violin - A Personification Poem by Elaine George

Violin - A Personification

Rating: 4.5


She sleeps in her rose wood bed,
under a blanket of velvet red;
old and alone and forgotten,
she dreams of the love she once had.

Once again she recalls his caress
on the curve of her hips
and her breast
as he moved his bow
on the strings of her soul,
playing her sound
‘til his passion was spent.
~~~

They traveled the whole world over,
to every city and town;
the maestro, his bow and violin,
bringing each curtain down.
~~~

He died in a cry of sweet refrain,
clutching her strings to his heart;
as he fell to the floor in a final encore,
tearing her world apart.
~~~

So she sleeps in her rose wood bed,
under a blanket of velvet red;
her strings still filled
with the song of her soul,
etched by the maestro
that loved her
so long ago!

~~~~~

POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
I once saw an old violin in a junk shop and it left a lasting impression on me - I wondered what its life had been and how it ended up here in this junk shop. I was so moved by it, that I eventually wrote this poem.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
HalIi Barry 04 April 2019

I love this poem i wish i was this talented.....

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Kate Wales 21 January 2018

I suppose it was ok but it was a tiny little bit too much to take in and it was all about love

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Caleb Williams 24 February 2020

Are you angry because it's about something you don't have? And if so, why would you even read this poem?

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HalIi Barry 04 April 2019

Well yuou just mean

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Colleen Courtney 29 March 2014

And I'm so glad writ it you did! This one is so beautiful! Written so well also. Thank goodness you saw that old violin! ! !

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Piyush Dey 28 March 2014

Nice try, lovely theme. flow of words were so nice. keep up the good work.

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