Viral Fever, Not So Cute! Poem by Geetha Jayakumar
Viral Fever, Not So Cute!
A cute virus
Looked at me lovingly
It look at the prospective victims
To whom it can over power easily.
But...
Don't know where it vanished into my body.
Well, still its trace couldn't be found in my blood.
It first gave me a mild
Dose of cold and sneezing
Then followed by cough
It went on adding its doses further
Giving me no time to get up
It gave me flue as well
Within a week
It shot my temperature so high that
I forgot who is standing nearby.
It gave me a feather touch of rashes red
Which irritated me further.
Still not satisfied
It increased my temperature.
So minute it is
It is invisible to everyone's eyes.
It shook my entire Immune system
Down with viral fever lying In a bed
As good as dead for a week
It shook away even my thoughts
I slept so badly
I felt I had never slept my life long.
Some times viral fever are so good
It will shake you so badly
It will leave you drained so completely.
Peaceful sleep free from any thoughts you can enjoy!
Remember...
It's deadly dangerous
It can just smoother your life into death
Detect it before it harm your entire life system!
Don't ignore if fever continue more than a week!
Don't take everything for granted and
give yourself into the hands of this love virus.
Well, you can give your hand to one who loves and cares you...
Definitely not one who love to kill you!
It's not love virus which affected you
Beware of this virus!
©ALL RIGHTS RESERVED BY GEETHA JAYAKUMAR 2014
© 2014.
You can write on any topic easily.Versatile poet you are!
You can write on any topic easily.Versatile poet you are!
Wow clever poem! Kudos. So what is that virus? The luv virus?
Love without pain, ah! no gain if love is truth then there is thorn in it we have to compromise...thank for share Geetha
Viral fever will shake you badly and will drain you completely that will give you a 'Peaceful sleep free from any thoughts you can enjoy! Loved reading this poem. Thanks.
Every virus is cute in one way as it`s mostly a protein envelope otherwise. It however weakens us and leaves us trodden upon. Love virus has no remedy. It generates poetry at the end..
Geetha - through your lovely deliberation you cautioned about these deadly viruses... very good Only one thing I'd like to mention here that a) these virus may kill you being present in you b) but the love virus will kill by deserting you only....... ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! !
Beware! It is a formidable enemy which can keep us as its victim even for weeks together....! Though may not be deadly, it is so menacing! Oh... never at all cute! Enjoyed this interesting write, Geetha!
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
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Yes viral fever has its merits and demerits though demerits count more than its merits...sickness of small importance should not be neglected be it viral or contained though viral lasts three to seven days as its incubation period.......Geetha......very well composed