Virtual Reality Poem by Fred Omorogbe

! ! ! reminds me of a vampire novel you should look up the song.. I love the night by Chris DeBurgh paints a good picture in my head as well as your song

! ! ! reminds me of a vampire novel you should look up the song.. I love the night by Chris DeBurgh paints a good picture in my head as well as your song

thats really cool! :) dark but really, really cool

great imagery write...well implied simile...

.....nine days fall completes. Fred, I have tried to visualize in these nine poems the complete downfall of man as consequence of his sin. May be I misinterpreted it, Please don't mind if it disagrees with your stream of thought. One thing is sure, poetry is your realm and metaphysics is your strength. CP

very provoking poem.. I like it..

very powerful and striking...reminds me of a poem i am currently working on, 'Icy Prison'...lc

wonderful poem, gave me goose bumps, I love this

i gave it a 10... good follow

You have a great talent at writing poems. You know what to write and what will bring people in. I enjoyed them all :) Well done!