Vision Of Time Poem by Shah Surja

Vision Of Time

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strange:
I saw the sadness - crows and humans,
I saw the wheels to be crushed - people and dogs.
Smashing!
I slit gun to flowering plants,
Give me some peace, to see the flowers.
Killer-determination:
Death is not the face - not facing death,
I'm not afraid of burning fire.

Thursday, November 19, 2015
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COMMENTS OF THE POEM
The chinmay 20 November 2015

well expressed poetry...nice writing

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Shah Surja 23 November 2015

Thank you

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Chinedu Dike 25 October 2019

Well expressed thoughts and feelings. An insightful creation. Thanks for sharing, Shah.

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Dorina Neculce 20 June 2016

Give me some peace, to see the flowers. nice poem

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Shahin Latif 03 December 2015

Great ink! I enjoyed to read it. Really so nice express. So, take my heartiest thanks. Be happy always.

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Shah Surja 06 December 2015

thank you dear....... ♥

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Dr Antony Theodore 25 November 2015

Give me some peace, to see the flowers.. a great desire of the poets and poetesses in the midst of the turmoil in today'as world.. thank you. tony

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Shah Surja 25 November 2015

Thank you dear poet ♥

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Rahman Henry 21 November 2015

Excellently illustrated poem.... Thanks and welcome to PoemHunter....

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Shah Surja 22 November 2015

Thank you Dear Poet ♥

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