Valerie Dohren

Silver Star - 3,344 Points (13 January 1947 / Southport)

Volcano - Poem by Valerie Dohren

Seething cauldron, an inferno
belching noxious vapours
spewing red hot molten lava
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Comments about Volcano by Valerie Dohren

  • Silver Star - 3,725 Points Dave Walker (12/7/2012 2:07:00 AM)

    A short and powerful poem. Like it. (Report) Reply

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  • Gold Star - 14,153 Points * Sunprincess * (9/25/2012 9:16:00 PM)

    Wow could just see the volcano and glad I wasn't in the path of destruction..excellent write.. :) (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 21,188 Points Valsa George (6/20/2012 12:41:00 AM)

    Very true! unkind words can burn like the sulphrous lava from a volcano! (Report) Reply

  • Bronze Star - 2,631 Points Smoky Hoss (3/18/2012 7:08:00 AM)

    Your way of morphing natural occurences into human emotions is excellent. Stunning even. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Frank Acquafredda (3/11/2012 10:26:00 AM)

    nice, i liked it...i will def check out a few more. i am new to the site, but i like what i see so far (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 7,634 Points Neela Nath (3/9/2012 12:38:00 PM)

    Strong.Diction praiseworthy. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 96 Points Robert Green (3/9/2012 8:43:00 AM)

    Great poem again Val :) (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 11 Points Micmac Mccrory (3/8/2012 8:03:00 AM)

    Waterfall and Volcano two straight to the point poems. I like the way you write. (Report) Reply

  • Silver Star - 3,924 Points Diane Hine (3/8/2012 7:48:00 AM)

    True, words can be powerfully destructive. Great analogy. (Report) Reply








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