Vultures Poem by lily peace lago every by to ph

Vultures

Rating: 5.0


Yet so beautiful opening the wings
flying above the sky..........

Hate the bare skinned face
so ugly and feel us pale..

when flying above the sky
wings are wide and that`s the zest
in us burst.......

seldom it flaps
and talented the most
and what a graceful creature?
In searching the carrion
soars so high with the beautiful
wide wings over the sky!

Kill the wounded and the sick
dwelve on the corpse
and barely attack the healthy
Vultures so ugly with bare skinned face
Yet, so beautiful opening the wings
flying above the sky...
where our emotions burst..........

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Raj Nandy 09 November 2009

You have described the vulture in its majestic flight very well! They have keen eyes and picks up its prey while floating high! 10! -Raj

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Kesav Easwaran 26 October 2009

you create a nice imagery there on a symbolic canvas...vultures all around! ...10

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Rm. Shanmugam Chettiar 22 October 2009

the vision of the vulture well pictured. shan

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Eyan Desir 16 October 2009

I hate these creatures But this piece was fine good write 10s

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