W! Th You! ! Poem by tanvi damle

W! Th You! !

Rating: 3.3


When you think your all alone,
and when you start to cry and moan.
When you can no longer hold on,
& when you feel weak instead of being strong..
When tears run down your face,
& when no one can your broken trust replace.
When you feel the world's turned into hell,
& nothing at all is going well.
When everyone's turned their back on you,
& you have nowhere to go to.
When you turn sad and soar,
& when you can't take it anymore.
When you fall and think you cannot rise,
& when you need some good advice.
Don't worry I'll wipe your tears,
& get rid of all your fears.
When you think everything has come to an end,
& no one can your broken heart mend, remember you still have a friend.
You're not alone, together we stand,
I'll be by your side, you know I'll take your hand.
Hold on to me tight, we will together fight,
Trust me, I'll make everything alright.
Keep holding on, I know you can make it through,
Just stay strong....I'm right here with you.
When your sad and scared & when you feel no one for you cares,
Don't worry I'll always for you be there.
When you think you've lost all you found,
I'll come & turn the world around.
Whenever your sad, lonely or sick, just call me up quick,
I'll come and give your worries a hard kick!
When your stuck in a tight spot, forget me not,
For I'll come and help you no matter what!

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Joseph Poewhit 22 November 2008

Last line is worth a million beyond

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Dr. Ratan Bhattacharjee 23 January 2010

this is how we can be with people when they are lonely. U could say 'we' instead of 'I'. this pluarality could give ur poem a bigger force of expression. To help the distressed is good, but to develop their self sufficiency is better. Let us give people courage and hope when they are alone and in need of such assistance. U have expressed the idea very well. poetic, artistic and lovely poem...Tanvi.carry on dear. Ratan

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Menime Soul..'d' Ugliloner 22 January 2010

Amazing poem, i like it...though words are out of reality.

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Anilnishant Sharma 18 January 2010

Tanvi, very beautiful poem, very reassuring for the one you love......... Cheers, Anil

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Indira Babbellapati 31 December 2008

this is how youthful exuberance should be spread around!

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C. P. Sharma 03 December 2008

a Godly gift! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! . CP

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