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Ken Suh (1/20/2009 7:36:00 PM)
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lol like Tiffany said this is Amazing! ! ! ! beautiful :)
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Rivers' Baby Gurl ;) (1/19/2009 11:29:00 PM)
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this is too good for words.....it left me speechless and u r still an amzing writer! ! ! i hope u dont mind tht i print this off and show it to my friends
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Sebastine Humaemo (1/19/2009 11:32:00 AM)
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words done from true love...........can see the pain n longing care in your lines dark girl.....n the way yu tried to express your pain to the one whom u loved much s awesome.....sebastine....10++.........
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JS Black (1/19/2009 7:41:00 AM)
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We've all been there and felt that. Teriffic job and keep up the good work...Jeff.
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Genesis Learny (1/19/2009 2:19:00 AM)
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i am so touched by this poem.i remember a time where ive felt lke this
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Kali Abyss (1/19/2009 1:51:00 AM)
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This is a very sad and deeply poem Dark girl...the poems I wrote I think that they born the day that the guy I loved betray me and leave me and kiss another girl...I though the wound will never heal, I hated him so much, I wanted to feel the same pain as I... but the time make me feel in love again with other person, and the hate that once feel now is gone, I cant tell you exactly how it vanish... but the time it heals all wounds and one day your heart will heal too =)
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Dolan Doran (1/18/2009 8:32:00 PM)
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It's dark...very vindictive...i like the poem, though the format through me off a little..and the flow was hard to catch..but all in all, I like it....good job. :)
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Naseer Ahmed Nasir (1/18/2009 11:27:00 AM)
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An emotional poem. It happens in teen age love, but soon you will know what really love is....keep on writing.
Best Wishes.
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sumaira .....ir (1/18/2009 4:57:00 AM)
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Innocent love poem, nicely writin, cute teen age feeling in it like it...
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Luis Alvarado (1/18/2009 4:34:00 AM)
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Love can really hurt! ! The pain is felt/ Good job! ! ~~
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