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Yoonoos Peerbocus
(2/17/2009 12:30:00 PM) |
vocab is highly selective to gear up the lovely theme
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Ken Suh
(1/20/2009 7:36:00 PM) |
lol like Tiffany said this is Amazing! ! ! ! beautiful :)
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Rivers' Baby Gurl ;)
(1/19/2009 11:29:00 PM) |
this is too good for words.....it left me speechless and u r still an amzing writer! ! ! i hope u dont mind tht i print this off and show it to my friends
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Sebastine Humaemo
(1/19/2009 11:32:00 AM) |
words done from true love...........can see the pain n longing care in your lines dark girl.....n the way yu tried to express your pain to the one whom u loved much s awesome.....sebastine....10++.........
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JS Black
(1/19/2009 7:41:00 AM) |
We've all been there and felt that. Teriffic job and keep up the good work...Jeff.
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Genesis Learny
(1/19/2009 2:19:00 AM) |
i am so touched by this poem.i remember a time where ive felt lke this
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Kali Abyss
(1/19/2009 1:51:00 AM) |
This is a very sad and deeply poem Dark girl...the poems I wrote I think that they born the day that the guy I loved betray me and leave me and kiss another girl...I though the wound will never heal, I hated him so much, I wanted to feel the same pain as I... but the time make me feel in love again with other person, and the hate that once feel now is gone, I cant tell you exactly how it vanish... but the time it heals all wounds and one day your heart will heal too =)
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Dolan Doran
(1/18/2009 8:32:00 PM) |
It's dark...very vindictive...i like the poem, though the format through me off a little..and the flow was hard to catch..but all in all, I like it....good job. :)
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Naseer Ahmed Nasir
(1/18/2009 11:27:00 AM) |
An emotional poem. It happens in teen age love, but soon you will know what really love is....keep on writing.
Best Wishes.
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