Aranthabailu Ummar


waiting


when she came out from hut
saw a bird fly over her
she wished to be as it

when she jumping near at pond
saw moving fish breaking water bond
also wished to be as it

then she found a cool shadow
beneath a tree feel gone many years past
as she hold the mango cloud parting her thinking

the path isfull of dust as wind gone strong
she counted swet drops as it drops from breast
as it clouding drops to meet the hopes

the smell of play and small journey to passion
when he tighten arm to bullock
to meet life she saw the seed of love

she relieved it when sun goes up
as birds rushes to nest she evoked it
the smoke he left burning his zest

sad glances for calm of the rain
desired wish still yet completed again
a shine on feel of the will taunting

the farm remained naked, pond drained
the sky dried, there is no smell exist
as she remained for one more morning

Submitted: Sunday, September 11, 2011

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  • Rookie - 363 Points Rekha Mandagere (9/29/2011 9:33:00 PM)

    Nice poem. Good imagery and well balanced thoughts centered around the poem. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 125 Points Romeo Della Valle (9/15/2011 9:15:00 PM)

    An amazing well penned and poignant write that clearly shows your great poetic talent! 10+++ Well deserved! Keep inspiring the World with more of such thought provoking writes! Love and Peace for always! Romeo from New York City... (Report) Reply

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