Waiting Poem by Kranthi Pothineni
Waiting
Ocean is still and calm
Breeze is cool and warm
Sun is bathing in charm
I sat down gazing it long
To hear my beats song
Sun glowed after its bath
Water too glittered like gold
Waves danced in grace
I sat down admiring that phase
While lighting a smile on face
Clouds came and passed
Sky dressed the ocean skin
Dark shades sailed into sand
I sat down cheering its reach
Like fulfilling a deepest wish
Sun moved away from blue
Slowly its fire too got dull
So it went to rest in peace
I still sat until its too dark
Waiting for morning to break
Waiting for the sunset and the morning simultaneously is an interesting phenomenon, Kranthi.
A fabulous nature you presented in imagery galore… 10+ Ms. Nivedita UK
flowing down like a pure stream your words are scintilating.......very nice presentation and crafted till end..............
like Lilies that float in the hyacinth of sweeten honey; tasteless lips touches the garrison of wonderful flowers......Lotus comes in my beautiful reality...such a lovely poem with a heart...Thank you and God bless....a 10 +++
nice simile, well embedded into this poem between two visual metaphors, which are used to personify two elements of the nature : ''Sun glowed after its bath Water too glittered like gold Waves danced in grace'' wonderful descriptive poem about the nature, lovely to read....10++++++++
A nice poem where everyone goes through it at one point of time.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
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stunning! ! ! ! ! ! ! beautiful imagry, loved it! ! ! ! ! ! (10 from me :))